主题：《颠覆的年轮》

                                              《颠覆的年轮》
                       动乱的年代                 
                               家庭的变故
                               毅然----
                               只身赴天涯
                               处处无家
                               处处家
                               理想的破灭
                               征途的迷茫
                               灵魂在飘荡
                               迷途如羔羊
 
                               天降大任
                               立足北疆
                               扎根黑土
                               岁月是师长
                               苦难是学堂
                               劳作是良方
                               风伴飞雪舞 
                               暗学松柏
                               耐严霜 
                                                   
                               初尝征途险
                               历尽唇舌剑
                               清自清来
                               浊自浊
                               无言望远方(雪山)
                               雪山冬青红
                               点我心头亮
                               跳蚤也欺人
                               满身流脓疮
                               惟泓大姐帮我医
                               温暖在心房
                               磨难虽多
                               心无暇
                              《海燕》心中翔
 
                               老官兵是领军
                               垦荒先驱驻马架
                               身先士卒战地荒
                               人生激励是榜样
                               修水库
                               割大豆
                               救山火
                               抢麦场
                               奋勇向前
                               豪迈在胸膛

         
                               战天斗地
                               已八载
                               荡我污浊
                               净我心灵
                               心中的荒原
                               染绿装
                               痛失青春
                               求真谛
                                
                               长思索......
                               望断天涯
                               黑土地
                               路漫漫 
                               夜漫漫                   

                               岁月的年轮
                               终将抹去
                               我曾存留的痕迹

                               暮回首
                               两鬓斑白
                               依然眷恋那......
                               哺育我的黑土地！
                                   
                                                     

        注：以上，非词，非曲，非歌赋，决（绝）不敢与以上的诗人们的诗作苟同。只是与在生命的某一段的同行人的精神上的交流，仅此而已。

首读，真情实感之作。

热烈欢迎幽谷中的藤蔓发表作品.用自己人生的脚步写出的诗句充满深情,令人感动.

                     谢谢两位老师的鼓励!

岁月是师长
苦难是学堂
劳作是良方

颠覆的年轮，有创意的题目，能引起共鸣的诗句。欣赏！

                       怡然：你好
            我非常欣赏你那具有深厚文学功底的优美篇章！！！        
        许多时候，文学是精神的脊梁。可惜我不懂诗，却欣赏着。

                     谢谢蓝雪的鼓励

                                                  暮回首
                                     两鬓斑白
                                     依然眷恋那......
                                     哺育我的黑土地！
                                   
欣赏!
是我们共同的感受!